Thursday, October 18, 2012

Still fumbling around, but enjoying Jesus in the process


Hello again. Here's a redone page one.... black is C:0 M:0 Y:0 K:100... dunno how to get it any blacker :) I've used ArtWeaver. Trying my best to get the resolution up, but the help section of this freeware is not exactly robust. This image should be 300 dpi... but I had thought that several re-do's ago and was wrong. I didn't see your comment, PAB, until I'd done it at 300. Will that print OK?  I enlarged my original to 2500 x 2500 pixels (to compensate for the 96 dpi resolution) then traced it using layers... and deleted the original layer and flattened everything into a jpg. I'm resigned to not being completely professional... as long as the quality doesn't distract from the message for the kiddos.

Saturday, October 6, 2012

Obey! Please comment :)

This is the book I'm creating for Stephen and Rockam. called "Obey". I'm posting these early images (a little less than half of the book) so that my artsy friends can give me some advice, pointers, etc.!

Background
A little about the book... I began this project because I've been working on teaching Stephen how to obey... right away, all the way and with a cheerful heart, as the Christian parenting mantra goes. I realized there was a lot to obeying with the right attitude... and as these thoughts simmered in my mind, out popped a picture book that I hoped would be humorous and enlightening for my favorite little book lover. The words and ideas for the pictures pretty much came over the course of a week. Actually producing the images has been a much slower process... For more on this, read my previous post.

God’s word says I need to obey my mom and my dad. But how should I obey?

Should I be messy and careless when I obey?

No! I should always be neat and do my best.

Should I be grumpy and pout when I obey?

No! I should have a cheerful heart and say “Ok!!”

Should I obey later?

No! I should be quick to obey right away.


Should I cry or complain when I obey?

No! I should always be willing to do what mommy and daddy say.

Should I get angry when asked to obey?
(Speech bubble says: Share with your brother, please!)

No! I should be peaceful and pleasant.
 
 
I've been struggling with keeping the little boy's look consistent. He started off with a really round, fat head. Later, he started to look a little more realistic. Many of the images above are substantially altered versions of their former selves. Are there some images you like better than others? What about them do you prefer? Do you feel the inconsistency of the main character's look is distracting? Or am I making too big a deal of it?

Background of the Obey book

More about the "Obey" book, if you're really interested.

About the Art(ist)
Some of you might know that I took a lot of art classes in high school.... er... nearly 20 years ago. I always liked art, but after high school I ceased to practice drawing. When I attended the grad program in journalism at UIUC in 2005, I took a news graphics course that reminded me how much I loved design. That led to a job as a designer and editor at a local newspaper... I feel that I can probably hone my skills into something workable, but I really need lots and lots of work. That's why I'm opening up these pages for discussion, pointers, constructive criticsm and just friendly encouraging (or friendly discouraging) comments.

About the Style
I'm in love with a lot of children's book illustrators' work. I grew up with the beautiful collage-like quality of books by Leo Lionni and the whimsical visions of childhood in Gyo Fujikowa's "Oh What A Busy Day." Some of my recent favorites are the bold, bright pictures in books by Lucy Cousins and Leslie Patricelli. My kids really like these kinds of illustrations too, so I was aiming for this kind of simple, colorful and cartoonish feel.

About the Medium
I'm not endowed with a budget that allows me to purchase Adobe Illustrator... and I'm paginating this book in my 7-year-old InDesign CS ....with no numbers after it. SO ... these illustrations are done in MS Paint. And saved as PNG files... (??) I know. Crazy and stupid. But I couldn't wait to start sketching, and Paint is what I have on my computer. So, there's no layers. There's no vectors. No bezier tool. I'm just using the "crayon" brush and sketching freehand, using my laptop's touch pad. I tried the mouse, which sucked. I have a really old Walcom tablet (seriously, from high school) but it has a legacy plug.

The text
I've written the text below each image. It will actually appear in the blank space above the picture. I'd love to purchase FF Providence Sans for this book, but might end up settling for the free "Kristin ITC" that's on my computer already. It's a step up from the font all designers love to hate, Comic Sans. This book is meant to be an 8.5 inch square. The font size will be 24 or 30 in black.